I made this comic in my notebook before the Telephone Jerry theme was out. I drew it in the book and was going to crop out some sketches on the opposite page. I thought I would leave them because that was the comic's original habitat. Also, the other half could just as much be on the Rhino.
I like Mamma and the writing.
ReplyDeleteThere are some good things happening here with pacing and the relationship between the writing and the images. The least text beneath the largest image mirrors the smallest scale of the character. I enjoyed the blowing pencil curtains and the eraser marks.
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