by Steve O'Keefe
Jesus put a curse on me
said I gotta love you
as much as I love me
-- when --
you ain't worth but half o'me!
Still, I gotta respect ya
'til the good Lord perfects ya
'cause Jesus put a curse on me
said I gotta love you
as much as I love me --
not just now,
but for eternity
-- when --
as far as I can see
you ain't no good!
Still, I'm s'posed to treat ya
like Jesus would.
I'd give up Jesus if I could
but Jesus put a curse on me
yes he did
yes indeed!
This reads more like a song than a poem, which I like, given its spiritual nature. Well done.
ReplyDeleteA new genre: the "Backhanded Spiritual"
ReplyDeleteHmmmmm
ReplyDeleteI entered a short version of the this in #NPRpoetry (120 character limit)
ReplyDeleteJesus put a curse on me:
I gotta love you as much as me.
As far as I can see you ain't no good!
I'd give up Jesus if I could